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Re: The Gate of Glendon- Chapters 3 & 4
I liked it a lot. It was confusing though between the chapters where one is in someone's POV and another is someone else's. I think it would be better if ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: The Eclipse Chronicles Prolouge/Chapter 1/2
I really liked it! :D It was a good start to a story that pulls people in... Or at least me. There was some grammar mistakes in it but not ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Unloved- Chapter 2 Dilemma (edited)
I think the last sentence just confused me... "First impressions were usually wrong, but I don’t know about my feelings for Chase though." I'm not sure... Just something about the ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Nightshine - chapter 1
Hmm... This was good I liked Mr. McFowen and how it seemed he knew something was going to happen. There's not much of a problem in this story other than ...
Apr 29, 2008